Wednesday, May 7, 2014
Death what is it
I believe that death is eternal sleep in which you can never awake from but you are somewhere where you can watch your love ones. This is kind of like "The Dead" where all of the dead watch but don't wish to be seen to not be thought about because it makes them uncomfortable. Death shouldn't have to be done alone and is really bad if it happens but it happens all the time and it shouldn't your family should stay with you to the end. They should comfort you and stay with you while you die so it's not as horrible. As "Life and Death" death is darkness that is there to remind you always you are dead and that life was light. This is what I think death is.
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Great job on letting your personal opinion show through!
ReplyDeleteThat had some very interesting ideas. I agree that people shouldn't die alone even though it does tend to happen. Good job.
ReplyDeleteYou did well integrating your personal opinions into this post. Make sure you pay more attention to the structure of the sentences. Also try and add more quotes into it.
ReplyDeleteYou did a fantastic job putting your own voice and opinion into your blog. You also had some very good ideas.
ReplyDeletei like how you put your own thoughts on death! good job also on stating what you think death is
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